Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Rough Page layout of Plane/Villain Crash Scene

Page layout by Ricardo Serrano (using Comical)

      This is a very rough page layout of the plane/villain crash scene. As of now I think the sequence will be better spaced out if spread over two pages instead of one. The point is to keep both stories speaking to each other, at least for the first half of it. As is evident, panel work will be the main selling point of the story.

     I am still experimenting with different narrative devices, trying to make sense of how the actual paneling might work. I am pushing for the following structure: Story A (superhero) keeps to the upper part of the page while Story B (terrorist) stays on the lower part. This approach was used in Jeff Lemire's Trillium (2013), a science fiction/ time-travel/ love story of a man and a woman trying to make sense of their connections whilst unstuck in the universe's time stream. In the issues where one character is on one timeline and the other character in another, Lemire resorted to two, half-page, narratives per page (one perspective on the top of the page and the other perspective below).

     As I write the the first draft of the script I find myself favoring this kind of approach more and more. And still, I do not believe I will need to conform to one very strict paneling style, even if its experimental. The point is not to go too crazy and to keep things coherent. Either way, the above image is to be taken as a glimpse of what it is I am trying to do with the story.

-Ricardo Serrano

Sunday, September 28, 2014

The Purpose Of This Blog

Unreal, Story by: Steven T. Seagle, Art by: Duncan Rouleau & Aaron Sowd
     This blog is a core requirement of the Creating Comics module (EN52032) that is offered in the University of Dundee's Comic Studies (MLitt) program, taught by Christopher Murray, PhD. In it you will find an original comic book story pitch authored by Ricardo A. Serrano Denis. Now, the actual purpose of this blog is to keep a detailed account of the creative process behind the story's progression, what influences make up the narrative approach, and how the actual comic book will look like by the end of the module. It will contain various drafts of the comic's script and original thumbnails, offering different perspectives as to the development of the final product. Feel free to comment and to strike up a conversation.

-Ricardo A. Serrano Denis

The Story so far...



By: Ricardo A. Serrano Denis

      When the Twin Towers fell, all the mayor Comic Book companies started releasing comic books reacting to the terrorist attacks, apologizing for the fact a whole universe of superheroes could not prevent them from happening. The Amazing Spider-Man #36 comic (by Straczynski and Romita, Jr.), for instance, came out and saw the city’s premier superhero, Spider-Man, too late for any kind of saving. All he could do was sit and watch, be a witness in his failure. In any case, the only thing he could do was help the ‘real heroes’ of 9/11: the firefighter, the cop, the doctor, the nurse, the public servant. The same went with other stories collected in commemorative anthologies. Superman apologized for not being real in a Steven T. Seagle strip. Batman glided through a Gotham night where every household displayed an American flag in a single page illustration by Lee Bermejo, a sign of unity uncommon to the people of his city.

     Superheroes were quite simply too late in these comics. But these books never showed or explained why their superheroes were late, oblivious even, to the attacks. Why they couldn’t prevent them. My comic book story will explore precisely those questions.

      Tentatively titled One Degree of Change, my story is about a superhero that was off saving the city, doing his job, while the Towers were attacked. He will not be able to prevent the attacks. But it will be because he was on another part of the city preventing another catastrophe. I want to develop a very unique approach to this story through panel structure. I want the superhero’s adventure to run parallel, simultaneously, with the events that led to the attacks (the plane’s hijacking and actual attack). For example, in one part of the story, our hero will crash through a window in order to get closer to the villain while in the panel running parallel to it the first plane will hit the first Tower. The panel with the superhero breaking through the window will bleed into the first Tower’s plane attack.

     Alternately, this last scene can also be played out in a more indirect opposition, where panel 1 is of the plane nearing the Tower while the second panel is of a villain just crashing through a window, suggesting the hero launched him out through it. The first panel bleeds into the second, metaphorically suggesting the plane hit the Tower while continuing the superhero’s story, simultaneously. It’s that sense of both continuity and ubiquity that I want to capture. (This take on the scene was suggested by a fellow classmate.)

      In the end, the superhero will become another witness to the attacks, helpless. He will only be able to look up at the Towers and take in the damage, another victim amongst many. But we will know why he couldn’t stop them.

The following changes came out of class discussion:
      I believe it will be extremely helpful to focus on two characters, one from each of the separate but simultaneous moments, the superhero and one of the terrorists on the plane. I think that a very mundane approach to both characters will actually play into the narrative better (thinking of Fraction’s and Ajá’s panel work in Hawkeye, in terms of their playfulness with the visual narrative). But having the terrorist character also go about preparing for his own ‘mission’ will bring it all down into a very human level and make the narrative all the more compelling. Still, the selling point to the comic book narrative will be the panelling structure and how both narratives intersect in it, building up into the final convergence of both stories into one.